Halloween Poem
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eeeeek
dig the knife a little deeper
the pain isn't great enough
I want to be a real creeper
one that takes your heart
breaking into a million pieces
never mind who I am
or what I am
I really do not matter !
it is what you are ,what you feel
and what you can steal
what feelings I have
what feelings I give
there is no reason for me to live so
dig the knife a bit deeper, deeper
my blood will run, all over the floor
wishing, wishing I had more
to make you feel if you can
who and what I really am
so turn that knife, twist and pull
if it makes you feel whole
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Yes I say well done to. I can feel that knife digging a little deeper and I'm not even an apple:0)
Makes me wish I had a red apple!
justom...yes...life and death...Have a fun Halloween, don't eat too much candy...:O) Hugs G-Ma
saddlerider1...yes, I feel it too. Deeply and it hurts...Thanks for commenting...:O) Hugs G-Ma
Pollyannaiana...yep...I just made 12 small apple pies and 6 tarts the day before yesterday, from all the apples I have...Yummm...wish I could send you a picture...but I think I have posted them here long ago, I do this every fall...:O) Hugs and thanks for commenting G-Ma
Very scary poem...I will leave the light on!
(((HUGS))) G-Ma! :)
nothing compared to saddlerider1's story....Hi sweet Lady...Having a nice day I hope...:O) Hugs G-Ma
I enjoyed this hub. Thank you so much for sharing.
Take care G-Ma Johnson.
Deep and mysterious Merle. Is it a pumpkin speaking to you? Us?
Well 'ralwus' it seems it can be just about whatever you can imagine...Thanks for stopping by :O) Hugs G-Ma
Eiddwen...Thanks for commenting and Take care too...:O) Hugs G-Ma
Great and unusual poem! Thanks for sharing it.
cwarden...I have to agree with you, not what I usually write...:O) Hugs G-Ma
Wow, that describes a pirate alright. A soul hurting and collecting booty. By any means necessary. Don't get too close to me unless you are prepared to cut me, to find out who I am. Take what you can and give nothing back. Hugs Ma!
no body...surprise to hear that from you...LOL I reckon it does sound like a pirate...:O) Hugs G-Ma
Must be the gypsy in me LOL
Love the picture and the short, vivid poem. Sort of dark but also very nicely written. Thanks for sharing.
justom Level 4 Commenter 19 months ago
Oh the life (and death) of a pumpkin. Well done G-ma!! Peace!! Tom